9/30/2007

< HI, THIS IS MY LETTER IS AN ADVICE FOR A FRIEND WHO HAS ONE PROBLEM WITH HIS GIRLFRIEND,AND HE WANTS TO AN ADVICE FOR CHANGE.

DEAR MAX


I HOPE THAT EVERYTHING IS OK, I WANT TO HELP YOU WITH YOUR PROBLEM, BUT IS IMPOSSIBLE THAT I CAN HELP YOU BECAUSE I DONT KNOW WHAT IS YOUR PROBLEM, I NEED THAT YOU WRITE ME FOR I CAN UNDERSTAND WHAT HAPPEN WITH YOUR GIRLFRIEND.

BUT I KNOW THAT YOU ARE A LITTLE IMPULSIVE AND I THINK THAT IS THE PROBLEM, BECAUSE I ALWAYS WAS KNEW THAT YOU ARE A LITTLE SERIUS,TOO.

IF YOU GIRLFRIEND IS STILL HANNA I WANT TO TELL YOU THAT SHE IS VERY PATIENT AND SHE UNDERSTAND YOU, FOR THAT THE BETTER IN THIS MOMENT IS SPEAK WITH SHE.... DONT WORRY, BUT I WANT TO THAT YOU THINK ABOUT THIS, YOU MUST CHANGE YOUR TEMPERAMENT.

I HOPE THAT I CAN HELP YOU, WRITE ME LATER. I SEE YOU.

2 comentarios:

DEISI YESSENIA ESPINOSA GARZON dijo...

Your advice should be more precisely, I think that you should inform about what is the problem of your friend so the advice will be more easy by understand.

JINA FERNANDA dijo...

Hi.

I consider that the most important is understand that each person have different personality and is different in your relationships too.

Furthermore I think that your advice for Max is appropriate because you need to know good the situation.

On the other hand, I have met some mistakes in your writing. However this can be understand.